Today for our learning we have been making some plans and thinking about what things we could add to pahurehures inlet. Some of my ideas might be helpful for pahurehures community.Here are some of my ideas!
I really enjoyed making my minecraft idea. This was really fun to do!
Whats your ideas?
Wow Sophie, your fort is like a magnificent castle! Well done for taking on this weeks learning and adding detail to your instructional writing. I like how you suggested flowers and lights to make your fort beautiful.
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- You can start each new step on a new line
- Instead of mixing number points (1,2,3, 4, 5) with adverbs (firstly, secondly, thirdly), you can choose one of them to introduce new steps.
Great work on your shapes slides! You've solved all the riddles correctly!
Wow, you have put a lot of time and effort into your mahi this week, Sophie. You have awesome Minecraft skills. The conclusion of your writing was really thoughtful - you wanted other people to come and see your fort and maybe get inspired to make their own. It's wonderful to hear how you like to share what you have with others.
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