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Tuesday, December 7, 2021

Poem for writing

 This is my poem. Its all about ice cream. I joined a google meet with Fire Tamzin and she asked us if we can do a poem all about ice cream! My poem has ice cream that is delicious!


 

I hope you like all the flavours!

Whats your favourite ice cream flavor?

3 comments:

  1. Wow, now I want to eat ice cream!!! That orea munch crunch sounds amazing right now. Thanks for sharing your work. My favourite ice cream is mint choc because I like the way the ice cream is cold and the flavour is cooling as well. I wonder what you really liked about the poem?? Next, maybe you could explain something that Whaea Tamsin taught you that helped you write this poem.

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  2. Hey Sophie!, Your menu sounds delicious! I would love to try these flavors. I think you need to tell the ice cream shop owners to create these. I loved the sound of the sour strawberry fresh.

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  3. Hi Sophie! Your ice cream flavours look delicious it's making me hungry.I think you should make an ice cream shop. My favourite ice cream flavour is chocolate.

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