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Monday, October 18, 2021

Pahurehure inlet

 Today for our learning we have been learning about pahurehures inlet and how bad the ocean and everywhere around it was. I have added some ideas to improve with pahurehures inlet.

    


I really enjoyed doing these slides i hope that pahurehures inlet community sees this.

What ideas do you have planned to help pahurehures inlet?

2 comments:

  1. Wow, Sophie. You have put a lot of work into this. When you did the math about the tree planting, you thought about including the trees at both ends - great thinking. :) Maybe you could show this thinking? You also worked hard to explain why the fresh water will be so much better for the Pahurehure Inlet. He tino pai tō mahi.

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  2. Hi Sophie, you are an expert at telling the time! Have a look at slide 8 again, on the bottom left clock, the time is 10:37, compared to 10:42, how many minutes difference is this?

    You've demonstrated your creativity in your explanation for your STEAM project. I really like the bridge idea, the view would be amazing. I agree that it's so important to improve the water quality. I like that you used firstly, secondly, and thirdly to introduce new ideas. You can also skip a line to separate them into paragraphs. Well done.

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