Hi my name is Sophie. I am a year 4 student at Papakura Central School. I am in Room 12. My teachers name is Miss Izelle. The place i live in is Ackland. Aoteroa.
Kia ora Sophie,this is Neave your Helmet Safety poster looks amazing and looks like you worked really hard I love it so much, you did such an amazing job but I think you should of made your title a different color because it kind of blends in with the background you chose and i think you could of put more photos to answer your question I love you and Erins poster.
hi neave it is sophie again thank you for commenting on my blog.Thank you for giving me some advise of my tittle. what part did you like about my helmet safety poster?I hope you have a great day!
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Kia ora Sophie,this is Neave
ReplyDeleteyour Helmet Safety poster looks amazing and looks like you worked really hard I love it so much, you did such an amazing job but I think you should of made your title a different color because it kind of blends in with the background you chose and i think you could of put more photos to answer your question I love you and Erins poster.
hi neave it is sophie again thank you for commenting on my blog.Thank you for giving me some advise of my tittle.
Deletewhat part did you like about my helmet safety poster?I hope you have a great day!