Today for the online learning i have been learning a whole new thing about a balanced diet. This is my work for today and i am happy for the things i have finished.
This is my work and i think i might be getting the hang of math.
Have you finished your work?
Hi Sophie, I encourage you to have a look at these slides: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1BvIex1PKuigQvaWpjQQ0tAZoZjidNlLTAiawBknXE2g/edit#slide=id.gec02a936f0_0_773
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Aside from delicious fruits, are there other food groups your body needs? Remember to add those in your food pyramid.
Writing
You've started an interesting story about the evil vegetarian teachers who threw away everyone's lunches. I wonder how the kids manage to solve this problem?
Well done for adding some dialogue (speech) in your story! It makes the story more interesting and helps me understand more about the characters.
You mentioned that the kids were frightened of the teachers. Can you try to describe this emotion using the show not tell strategy we've learned?
Math
Really great to hear that you are feeling more and more confident about math. I can see that you've got a good understanding of your tenths place value and how this relates to decimals.
Well done for giving the maths in slide 25 a go. Would you mind sharing your maths thinking with us?