My work

Friday, May 28, 2021

Writing

Purpose: To Inform

Audience: Family

Rt:To use paragraphs

My family has 6 members. My 2 brothers, Sister, Mum, Dad and my Nan. My siblings are all younger than me.I like to play with my brother/ Baby brother.



My culture is cook island Maori. I love my culture. I don't have a traditional thing we do as a family.




My identity is to be me. I love who i am. My favorite food is pizza. My favorite color is purple,blue,white and black.





This is my writing and i enjoyed this.

Whats your identity?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sophie, it's great to see that you are working towards your remember tos. You have separated your ideas clearly into three different sections talking about your culture, your family and your favourite things. Well done.

    I big part of my identity is cooking! I love making delicious food for my family in the kitchen.

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