Writing
I went to outer space. It took quite a while. When we were looking around and I was very shocked my eyes opened wide and my mouth was widened. I saw a magnificent and colorful bunch of different colored galaxy. I was so happy! I wanted to touch it but it is to precious to destroy when other people might want to see it. I'm pretty sure they would admire the galaxy. Galaxy's are so pretty!
I really enjoyed how Mr Cossey enjoyed my story. He said he liked what i have done like i have added some like good words.
Do you know what the describing words are in my story??
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