Hi my name is Sophie. I am a year 4 student at Papakura Central School. I am in Room 12. My teachers name is Miss Izelle. The place i live in is Ackland. Aoteroa.
It’s great to hear that you are proud of your work. Just looking at your procedural writing about your favourite sandwich could you please go back and add more detail. For example step 1 get a piece of.... step 2 spread the butter... etc. I’m a little confused about what to do with the ingredients to make a sandwich. Can you help me?
so you need to like with the pitures you need to move them around in how you are going to make your sandwich and then you need to name them in the steps.
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It’s great to hear that you are proud of your work. Just looking at your procedural writing about your favourite sandwich could you please go back and add more detail. For example step 1 get a piece of.... step 2 spread the butter... etc. I’m a little confused about what to do with the ingredients to make a sandwich. Can you help me?
ReplyDeleteso you need to like with the pitures you need to move them around in how you are going to make your sandwich and then you need to name them in the steps.
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